In many Countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Due to the advancement of technology a lot of
is being completed efficiently and productively. Using new technologies individual can able to produce more while putting less effort.
essay will discuss about the merits and demerits of the new machines which are helping humans in their daily life. Nowadays, there are so many manual
is being completed using automatic machines. These machines,
, being build by observing individuals what they are doing to complete their daily
For Example
: - In a sugarcane industry people
, washing and clean sugarcane,
, they squash it,
they boil it and
, they process it to get sugar out of it,
, multiple machines can be integrated with an
of all these things which we keep on running 24 by 7 to produce more sugar in less number of time.
training of machines is called as
, and using
in the industry can be completed with less human intervention and at the end it benefits to all. The major risk that occurs because of these automated tools is people loose their jobs because their intensive labour
is being replaced by the machines. These industrialist, in order to earn more, they replace humans with machines and produce more material which in return only provide benefits to the employers, whereas, the labour class people struggle to get their bread and butter. As per the research by the intelligence agencies, 40% of people had lost their due to autmation. To conclude,
helps us to increase our daily productivity and
is being achieved by simulating human behaviour at
these machineries being trained and automated. Individual should be given priority at
and some law should be made so that people should not loose their jobs because of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondhand smoke
  • prevalence
  • respiratory issues
  • environmental pollution
  • litter
  • healthcare costs
  • smoking-induced illnesses
  • encourage smokers to quit
  • public health improvement
  • justified
  • public spaces
  • exposure
  • non-smokers
  • inconvenience
  • younger populations
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