You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Stephanie, Greetings from India,

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been almost two years since we

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saw each other. I am excited to tell you that I will be in San Francisco on the 12th. I was looking forward to going on an adventure with you and possibly relive some of the weekend escapades we had when I lived there. The reason I will be in San Francisco is to actually attend a technical conference where I will be presenting a paper on swarm technology. After which I have a week to explore some places that are on my bucket list.

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, I was thinking we could go to Big Sur where I heard that the California Poppy flowers are in full bloom. I

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wanted to visit Peiffer beach which is known for its purple sand. But we have to book tickets in advance because entry is limited and it's in an isolated area. In conclusion, I am eagerly waiting to meet you and rent a convertible so we can get the full California experience. Warmly, Sujith Mathew Geevarghese

Submitted by Sujith mathew Geevarghese on Sat Sep 05 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

178 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities Write at least 150 words.

The Closing

The picture shows the process of making wool. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks overweigh the disadvantages?

It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other coutries. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your experience

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?