Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Graduate schools some subjects due to lack of interest, but boys can be opposed
has
become popular in Change the verb form
have
this
competitive era and some people think that male and female are considered to enroll
equally in every Change the spelling
enrol
course
, but according to my perspective, they should be admitted by grades. I will discuss my point of view with examples in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, it is considered that universities need to give admission evenly to girls and boys, but there are some reasons that
why these colleges should devote their intension towards Remove the determiner
apply
a
bilities of both sex students. Add an article
the
For example
, newspapers show some advertisements regarding some test, which are given by students prior to entering at the college and it is a
ppropriate way to get prestigious students who really work hard to get admission in universities. Add an article
an
Also
, These pupils should be deserved and it does not matter they are boys or girls. Hence
, student's interest is the first
priority what course
they prefer to accomplish, so girls cannot optVerify preposition usage
for
of
it.
Verify preposition usage
to
Moreover
, multifarious course
are
provided by the universities, which are in different fields, so female student unable to participate in these subjects. Change the verb form
is
For instance
, some fields, such
as mechanical engineering, manufacturing and other streams that require practice skills or physical heavy strength, so graduate institutes do not recommend these kinds of subject to female students. In addition
, constructing b
uilding is not a Add an article
a
peace
of cake for women as they are softer than men and can not carry Correct your spelling
piece
heavy weight
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
heavyweight
e
qual number of female and male is not important in every Change the article
an
the
course
. Also
, they should be admit
according to grades as well as some specific Change the verb form
be admitted
course
should be offer
according to physical stamina.Change the form of the verb
offered
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