Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Graduate schools
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become popular in
this
competitive era and some people think that male and female are considered to
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equally in every
course
, but according to my perspective, they should be admitted by grades. I will discuss my point of view with examples in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, it is considered that universities need to give admission evenly to girls and boys, but there are some reasons
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why these colleges should devote their intension towards
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bilities of both sex students.
For example
, newspapers show some advertisements regarding some test, which are given by students prior to entering at the college and it is
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ppropriate way to get prestigious students who really work hard to get admission in universities.
Also
, These pupils should be deserved and it does not matter they are boys or girls.
Hence
, student's interest is the
first
priority what
course
they prefer to accomplish, so girls cannot opt
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some subjects due to lack of interest, but boys can be opposed
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it.
Moreover
, multifarious
course
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provided by the universities, which are in different fields, so female student unable to participate in these subjects.
For instance
, some fields,
such
as mechanical engineering, manufacturing and other streams that require practice skills or physical heavy strength, so graduate institutes do not recommend these kinds of subject to female students.
In addition
, constructing
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uilding is not a
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of cake for women as they are softer than men and can not carry
heavy weight
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. In conclusion,
e
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qual number of female and male is not important in every
course
.
Also
, they should
be admit
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according to grades as well as some specific
course
should be
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according to physical stamina.
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