Traffic and housing problems in major cities can be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Solutions to congestion on roads and housing issues in megacities may be solved by the migration of large companies outside the metropolis.
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some believe that relocating all the companies may solve the problem, I partially agree because non-production companies, have an insignificant number of employees and would not impact on the traffic problems or issues with housing
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with manufacturing involves more people and, and would have a greater effect of relocated business. On the one hand, there are types of businesses,
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non-production, that should effectively interact with other organizations and customers within the
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. In these companies, staff numbers are much lower than in the manufacturing facilities. If they moved with all employees outside the
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, the municipality would not solve road and household problems due to the insignificant numbers involved workers.
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, the number of managers might be ten times lower than manual workers
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that would not have a massive effect on cities' problems due to the difference in amount.
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, relocating production powers and staff might solve the
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's difficulties. Unlike office workers, they only work inside factories and plants.
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, if some productions relocate outside the
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, that would reduce the number of people on the highways and in subways especially in peak hours because thousands of workers would not commute to work at the same time.
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, due to the migration of production workers' families,
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will decrease housing demand and on
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basis, the relocation would have a positive impact on the price of housing. In conclusion, based on the above facts, we could say that a balanced decision should be made. The relocation of manufacturing and their workers could solve problems, while non-production companies' relocation would not significantly impact
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issue.
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