Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local language. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Globalization brought us a major impact
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learning languages, specifically
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. It is widely speaking language globally, so adapting to
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system make us competent. I would suggest, having
multi language
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skill is considered as one of the major
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by educational institutions and employers. We can have
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iscussion, how learning
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is important for
self survival
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, at the same time native languages shouldn't be faded out.
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