Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every human in
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world will have their own space. Some people wanted to keep their lives private and some will remain as an open book.
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xception where people lives are always at limelight whether they like it or not.
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– Film stars, famous
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, musicians etc The glare of publicity and fame revolves around any celebrity which has its own advantages and disadvantages. Some people love
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media attention and
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it well. Instance take Kareena Kapoor from Bollywood film Industry who likes to make public appearances often and even her pregnancy and motherhood made headlines as well as controversies. While few stars wanted to maintain
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privacy and doesn’t want any media attention. They consider their work as any other profession and wanted to lead a private life.
On the contrary
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care about what a celebrity wants or prefers. They keep following them wherever they go and tries to click pictures. We all can notice pictures from airport, film shoots and even when they spend time with their friends or families. Everything is
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news for them.
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pposite gender, they try to make a story out of it just to get the viewership. I feel that
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rivacy of every individual must be respected. Only suggestion is, everyone’s privacy and profession should be treated with dignity and decorum
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  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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