Some people believe students should attend gym classes in school to improve their haelth and fitness,while others believe school should only focus on academic subjects.Do you think students should have gym classes in school?why or why not?

Education which is given by

school

is made up an important part of individuals’ lives.

However

, there is disagreement about the content of subjects. Many people claim that

school

should provide intellectual lesson

instead

of physical, whereas others defend that gym classes are as important as other lessons and I totally agree with

this

idea.

First

of all, the majority of children begin

school

at their early ages. During

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ducation process, not only their cognitive skills but

also

their physical characteristics change constantly. For

this

reason, pupils should be encouraged to participate in gym classes to be grown as a future’s healthy adults.

Moreover

, a study which is carried out Oxford University reveals that children who take part in gym class effectively show more success than children who don’t attend. According to

this

study, physical activities are beneficial not only for body health but

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intellectual activity.

On the other hand

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imitations of subjects with academic ones lead to

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disappearance

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isapperance of many children physical skills. As every child differs from each other. They have various tendencies in different fields. When some of them are successful in science, some of them show great accomplishment in sports

such

as basketball and football. Because of

this

, subjects which are provided by

school

should be comprehensive. In summary, children should be led

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various type of classes for their intellectual and physical health. By doing

this

, their skills are uncovered and they are able to get convenient education in accordance with their skills.