It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for the society. Do you agree or disagree

Marriage is the formal union between two individuals. It has been suggested that people should be encouraged to marry before they attain the

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of 30.

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essay agrees with the suggestion completely because it helps reduce the

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of maternal mortality for women above that

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.

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helps with active parenting and

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up process with child growth if married by 30 years because

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arent would still be active and can grow up with their children. Individuals should be encouraged to tie the knot before the

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of 30.

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should be widely birth because they are high

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, and as

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pose danger to their life and the child

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they are carrying. Research has discovered that the older you are before getting pregnant the higher the

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. Women in Africa above 30, are at

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of pregnancy and childbirth which is of one related causes of mortality.

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, people should be encouraged to marry before the

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of 30 because it helps parents actively follow up the activities and growth of their children better as opposed

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training kids in old

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. Parents at

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age

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work harder to ensure that the kids are well trained and are involved in their daily lives.

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, I gave birth to my son when I was 25 years and till date

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I am his private tutor at home because am actively involved in his daily activities. In conclusion, I will suggest that people should be encouraged to marry before the

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of 30. It will help reduce the maternal mortality rate as well as

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eath rate of kids at birth. It will

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be of great support from parents to their children to be a part of their day to day activities and growing up.