An increasing number of people are now using the Internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, because of the development of technology and the appearance of the

internet

, people can easily contact

with

Verify preposition usage

apply

show examples

each other without worrying about

d

Add an article

the

show examples

istance.

This

Change the determiner

These

show examples

conveniences are supposed to make people acquaint each other easier, while

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

others believe that people are becoming more isolated. In my opinion,

although

using the

internet

can easily bring people together, it still an unrealistic environment and we should not depend on it. On the one hand, it is true that the

raising

Correct your spelling

rising

show examples

use of

i

Add an article

the

show examples

nternet could help people acquaint with

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

others easier. Nowadays, people can easily

talking

Change the verb form

talk

be talking

show examples

together and

expanding

Change the verb form

expand

be expanding

show examples

their circle of friends by just a compact device

such

as

s

Add an article

a

show examples

martphone, laptop, or a computer.

This

is because of the appearance of many communication

facility

Change to a plural noun

facilities

show examples

like Facebook, YouTube, and Instagram. Those social media can easily help people know each other and chatting together everywhere and

everytime

Replace the word

every time

show examples

they want.

For example

, you can easily keep in touch with your friend who living in

the

Change the article

a

show examples

foreign country by using Messenger to chat together

instead

of exchanging letters like the past.

In addition

,

this

development of

internet

can

also

support people in promoting their working environment

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

and exchanging with many partners in abroad countries.

For example

, if you are

an

Change the article

a

show examples

businessman, you can work without going the company but still be able to

meeting

Change the verb

meet

show examples

and talking with your employees by a lot of video call apps

such

as Zoom, Messenger, and Skype.

On the other hand

, using

i

Add an article

the

show examples

nternet may lead people to

overusing

Change the verb form

overuse

show examples

, and cause addiction.

This

is because using the

internet

or social media can form in people a habit of using phone, and people will find that it is hard to be remote from their phones in a short time. Having a habit of using

i

Add an article

the

show examples

nternet or phone could

also

create for people a sedentary lifestyle and make people totally depend on the unrealistic world.

Hence

, people can easily immerse themselves in

v

Add an article

the

show examples

irtual world, and less

interact

Replace the word

interaction

show examples

with

other

Replace the word

others

show examples

in

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

real life.

Additionally

, overusing

i

Add an article

the

show examples

nternet can make people feel lonely because they just isolate themselves from

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

outdoor environments. Suffering from loneliness in a long time can cause in people depression and create for them many

problem

Change to a plural noun

problems

show examples

such

as Losing communication skills and health issues. Overall,

although

using

i

Add an article

the

show examples

nternet can

brought

Change the verb form

bring

be brought

show examples

people closer, I still believe people will become more isolated and depressed