Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 254 words.

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Nowadays, among the several types of available news very selected ones are being broadcasted or delivered to the common individuals. The prime reason behind

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activity is that the news media has diverted to the money-making path. It is the common belief among the news presenters that bad news brings more sight to their news channel or more buyer for their newspaper rather than the positive news. I will be discussing these issues in more detail in the following paragraphs. Media is fully aware of the fact that the negative news attracts the eyes and ears of the common public,

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in order to gain more business they always go for the broadcasting of bad news

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of the good news or

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, we can say that every individual pays more

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towards the negative news rather than the good news, as the news business is completely based on the number of views they get

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bad news are telecasted more than the positive ones. Take an example of news like an ordinary girl from a small village performed well in the hockey game and she has been selected for the Olympics would not more views

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of that the news like scams will grab more

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why the bad news gets broadcasted as breaking news to gets more

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from the public, unlike the good ones. I personally believe that it would be better if positive news will be telecasted as the breaking news because somewhere we cannot deny that bad news

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influences the people to get involved into criminal activity, news of robbery, scams and rape raise the thought of committing

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crimes Because human always gets influenced through their senses. If their senses will receive negative things so, their thoughts will be negative

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, in order to change its broadcasting of good news is very essential. In nutshell, if news media will move their little

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towards the wellbeing of the society from making money, it will be beneficial for the society, in order to achieve

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broadcasting of positive news is a very important and game-changing step.

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

356 words

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people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Companies should provide sorts and social facilities for local communities.

Cultures around the world are becoming more similar that ever before. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?