Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countries vary in their level of development,

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the reason that there are three types of nations among the worlds (

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, and,

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countries). countries that have a high economy often give

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and help for poor ones to help them develop their nations.

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process exists by making organisations, and, give donations.

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, even with all these advantages,

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progress is unfair and should be corrected. Even when rich countries give some

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for undeveloped nations,

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is not everything,

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, wealthy countries should not give the same amount of

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for all the

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because some countries need more

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than others,

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; some countries suffer from wars, while others experience a pandemic. To make it clear; Yemen is a nation that suffers from wars, but only a small number of

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is given to it annually, hundreds of dollars are just not enough for families in Yemen to live, for that reason, Yemen kids are starving and they even forced to eat tree leaves to stay alive!. Giving

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to poor countries is not enough, poor nations need developing their educations, health centres, and, roadways. to be coherence, if you teach poor kids and made it easy for them to go to school every day, it can be more helpful for them and their nations at the same time, they can be doctors, and developers in the future, and in that way; they will help their countries,

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, in Yemen, kids do not have schools or places to study, but they manage to study under trees with a little bit of knowledge, if these kids were given schools and a high level of education, they will be more effective in the future. To sum up,

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and financial aid are not enough for helping poor nations, you can help them more in different ways, wealthy countries are doing a great job in helping others, but they need to correct their way and expand their help to be more helpful.