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Government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?

#government #budget #arts #money #education
It is undeniable fact that
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 ways represents the mirror of the society and has great cultural significance.
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uling party should redirect funding allotment from art project development to educational enhancement. I personally do not agree with
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 argument, I hold an opinion about treating both equally as each has unique importance for the nation. The proponents of a strong educational system over craft, mostly point out that well-educated citizens are the core behind the development and bring myriads of benefits for
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ountry’s growth. Since
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 majority of citizen holds value and money convertible skills, they can earn more and pay more taxes back to the government
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 that, the return of allocation of budget in educating people is higher.
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ndustrial revolution in
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800’s, was because of educational reforms which were started by the French government, which later resulted in lower the poverty rate all over the globe. On the other end of the spectrum, I support the argument that every country becomes whole when they support fine arts abreast to education. It is a world-known fact that looking at various creative work reduces stress and creating
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assionate and ardent fan of creative skill, are always problem solvent, imaginative and confident.
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, a culture which is rich in history and arts, always attract more tourist which eventually boost the economy. To sum up, even though education is a cornerstone for the development of society, it is imperative to preserve and grow the art of a region.
Hence
, the ruling party should equally proportion the budget for national arts and educational system enhancement.
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