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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position

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A
company
 has announced that wishes to build a large industry near your
community
. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 new influence on your
community
. Do you support or oppose the industry? Explain your position. When a new
company
 arrives into a
community
 it often helps to increase the local economy but,
also
 can create some bad issues,
such
 as environmental problems. The construction of a large new
factory
 creates a lot of job opportunities in many different fields and
this
 can be important for the local economy and for the families that are supported by the
factory
. A big
factory
 or
company
 generates jobs not only for the people that work there but,
also
, for some secondary business, like restaurants, logistics and many others.
Besides
, the
company
 contribute to the local city through tax payment.
On the other hand
, the construction of a large
factory
 can have an environmental impact,
such
 as deforestation or water and air pollution. To avoid these problems the
company
 must study the possible damages and find solutions to avoid or reduce them. It is important for the
company
 to invest some money into these issues to have a good image in the
community
 and the local government. In my opinion,the construction of a new
company
 tends to generate more advantages than disadvantages for the local town. The main disadvantage that industry can cause to the
community
 is the environmental damage but, nowadays, with technologies,it is possible to manage them. In conclusion, the
company
 should be willing to invest in the
community
 and look after the environment before having profits with the new business.
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