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Many museums charged for the admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

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There are increasing numbers of galleries erected to display the artwork and history around the world. Many of these places require an entry fee, which carries merits that outweigh the demerits.
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, by implementing charges for these admissions, the costs of overheads and maintenance
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 covered. These places often have several lightings in place to emphasis and bring out the brilliance of the artworks.
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maintenance
 requires manpower and with the proceeds that come from visitors would cover the charges. On the one hand, many could be deterred by having to fork out money to view
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 forms o artwork. They do not see
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easoning behind paying for something that they do get to own and would not visit
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 of interest. In conclusion, it is
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 to place a charge into museums that identify and educate the general public of history.
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