Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that advertisements have become part of our lives. Regularly, they appear even if we do not search for anything and some people prefer to ignore them. I believe that advertising is completely worthwhile when it comes to

persuade

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people to purchase products.

To begin

with, the market of publicity has been creating new sources to captivate the audience.

In other words

, the appeal occurs not only by T.V. commercials as before

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but by social media, telemarketing and text messages,

for instance

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Moreover

, the products are found by categories in organized sectors to

active

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selected targets,

such

as automobilist, culinary, beauty, healthy, and etc.

Consequently

, it encourages people to go straight at the point and shop what they need in a faster way. Admittedly, the Internet is essential to increase the number of advertising campaigns, which are absolutely eye-catching by the consumer’s eyes.

On the other hand

, some people feel extremely disturbed by advertisements and they prefer to ignore them.

Additionally

, some of them are absolutely intrusive,

for example

, the Internet Pop-ups which are provoking the rejection of the link by users. Another point to be considered is that people are becoming stressed by the excessive amount of publicity that they receive without ask for it. Some companies have the client’s database and send

all time

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emails, letters and text messages annoying them.

Thus

, it is unlike that clients will consume these and the sellers will decrease because of the

excessively

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advertising. To conclude, in my opinion

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new sources of advertisement can be strongly successful since they do not disturb the consumer’s privacy.

Besides

that,