These days many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reason that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price?

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Nowadays,
instead
of the high expense, a large number of people are becoming interested in purchasing organic foods rather than buying foods which are available in the super shops. There are some purposes behind
this organic foods consumption
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the consumption of this organic food
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such
as these are healthier than other conventional foods and these are
also
used as remedies. In my opinion, though it is not absolutely a necessity, it can be bought by them who are capable of affording
this
. To commence with the reasons, organic foods are beneficial to health.
In other words
, these meals are free from chemicals or any kind of preservatives,
thus
, healthy. Presently, not only the foods, many are using organic makeup items to keep their skin fresh and healthy.
For example
, researches have shown that the usage of organic makeup items is bought by females, as well as males have increased by 20% than the previous year in many Asian countries.
On the other hand
, it is not important for anyone to buy these natural foods and it is purchased by those who can afford these expensive items.
In addition
to
this
, purchasing natural products help the environment and the local people to grow their business
further
.
Furthermore
, people who can avail these items consume
this
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items but
this
does not add much extra food value to their food lists. To conclude, a large number of the population are consuming more organic foods in recent years than the foods they generally consume which availed from supermarkets.
However
,
this
consumption is not a necessity but a preference, it can be avoided from their daily food list.
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