More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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what the governments could do to make public
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attractive
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car
more enjoyable.
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of all, travelling by
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, especially after a hard day working. In Brazil, some cities, for
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, the buses are the only type of public
transport
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comfortable
travelling almost one hour up
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.
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possible reason is
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rivate
car
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passengers
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journey
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than
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se more public transports.
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, at the pic time the governments could
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offer
more options of transports.
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has more public transports it will not
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and
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passages
will enjoy more the
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journey
after a long day at work. Other suggestion
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some lines
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which
does not stop in some stations. In Melbourne as
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example, some lines stop in all station while there other
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trains
which will stop only on
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the
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ore popular station or at
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straight
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center
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.
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journey
by
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train
faster than
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ar in Melbourne. In conclusion,
car
are
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more
confortable
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comfortable
and usually
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car
also
are
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faster than some public transports.
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, give more alternatives to travel by buses or trans along with build some especially line which
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straight to the city
center
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are
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some suggestion that the
gornanments
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ornaments
could do to encourage the residents
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se more public transports.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • private cars
  • public transport
  • convenience
  • flexibility
  • comfort
  • privacy
  • time-saving
  • reliable
  • efficient
  • traffic congestion
  • parking space
  • safety
  • security
  • affordability
  • cost-effectiveness
  • awareness
  • information
  • incentives
  • initiatives
  • government
  • improvement
  • infrastructure
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