More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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use more

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what the governments could do to make public

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more

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attractive

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more enjoyable.

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of all, travelling by

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is much more

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, especially after a hard day working. In Brazil, some cities, for

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example

, the buses are the only type of public

transport

and it is not

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travelling almost one hour up

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.

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. it is because public transports have stops for

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passengers

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journey

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than

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offer

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has more public transports it will not

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and

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after a long day at work. Other suggestion

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does not stop in some stations. In Melbourne as

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example, some lines stop in all station while there other

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trains

which will stop only on

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ore popular station or at

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straight

to the city

center

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.

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solution makes the

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journey

by

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train

faster than

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ar in Melbourne. In conclusion,

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are

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more

confortable

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comfortable

and usually

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also

are

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faster than some public transports.

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straight to the city

center

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are

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some suggestion that the

gornanments

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ornaments

could do to encourage the residents

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se more public transports.