Test and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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Nowadays, a majority of people argue that around the world, written and verbal exams have taken

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main stage in schools. I firmly believe evaluation on the basis of marks is a necessity

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and a major contributor in

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ducation system, and in

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I will discuss its merits and demerits.

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, with the help of examination, the educational Institutes can

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differentiate

between students, which can help them to address

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weakness

weaknesses

. Through marks, a

student

calibre can be judged, helping teachers to create a future path for each

student

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, if a

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not performed well in physics, extra classes can be conducted after school hours to enhance their knowledge. In

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, Annual scores

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suggest children interest in a particular subject, which can be its potential profession in future. Schools can help

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ndividual to grow in that particular field.

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, evaluating on the basis of score can helps schools to differentiate between every

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, and guide them

accordingly

On the other hand

, there are many who argue that annual mark systems give mental

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harassment

to students. Effecting their confidence and inducing stress, which ultimately lowers their morale.

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chool is to prepare their students for the real world, filled with all sorts of hardship and difficulties. Exams

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students to grow mentally stronger. It

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their cognitive, logical and emotional skills. After a whole year of hard work, when a

student

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, confidence is boosted.

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courage helps him to tackle the world fearlessly. To

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conclude

, Examination and tests help

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chool to find

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students

week areas and address them suitably. Though the mental pressure on children is a concern preparing them mentally strong for their future

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clearly

outweighs the demerits.

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