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Some people believe that money is more important than free time for a good quality of life. Others say the opposite is true. Discuss both views. What is more important in your opinion? Give relevant examples.

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Some people would argue that it is imperative to earn more wealth sacrificing quality
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, while some say that it is essential to spend quality
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 to lead a better
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.
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 earning more money is seems lucrative, I believe that having leisure
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 for ourselves is a better option. On the
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 hand, people think that spending more
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 in office premises on
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 gives them an opportunity for a better
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. In today's competitive
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 environment, people often spend
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xcessive moment in their offices
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 extra hours and indulge in a rat race, to earn buy a better house or an expensive car. They
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 often want to be able to shop at will either online or from stores, for themselves or their family.
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, a 2018 report in the Times of India stated that on an average the
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 hours of an employee in companies have increased to 25% from that in 2015.
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, I do not agree with
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 way of living
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's
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 because it does not allow
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 to spend enough moment with loved ones and,
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 does not give happiness.
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, spending quality
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 with family is far more important for leading a happy
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. Research has proven that
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 individuals tend to stay happier when they spend more
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 with their loved ones. It is thought that
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 having a balanced lifestyle is extremely important for the growth of human beings because it helps an individual maintain not only his physical health but
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 his emotional health.
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, spending
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 with loved ones improves the bonding between family members. To illustrate, the University of Mumbai created a poll on the emotional health of people, more than 75% voted that spending more
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 with family. I believe that spending leisure moment with family is more important because it makes the person happier in
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. To conclude,
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 spending more
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 at
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, means that people get wealthier, I believe that spending free
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 with
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's family helps individuals be more happy and satisfied in
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. It is recommended that companies force individuals to only required
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 at
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 and balance their lifestyle.

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