Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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egetarian and vegan diet has become more popular than it was in the past
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because it is said that consuming only vegetables (and fish, dairy products) could improve our health and save the Earth. In
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belief and will give my personal opinion.   In today's society, being fit and healthy is the lifestyle that most people wish. To
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purpose, some of them decide to give up eating meat, fish and other animal products and balance their meals with only natural products, vegetables and fruits. They are certain that
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diet is safer, that it has fewer calories so they can eat more and that it helps our digestion.
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, I am a vegetarian, too. Since when I have stopped consuming meat, I have been feeling happier and fulfilled about myself, by seeing my body getting slimmer and smarter. Another important reason for why some people choose
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egetarian diet is because they want to save animals and the world. A recent survey about animals has reported that over 20 billion chickens, 27 billion pigs and 15 billion cows were being killed for our wants of meat
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year, and these trends are forecast double in ten years.   In conclusion, the consumption of animal products should be restricted by governments in order to kill fewer animals, but it is still impossible to make it come true. I hope that all beings living on the Earth can be treated equally.
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  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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