Some people think the money they earn should be enjoyed by spending it now, while other thinks that their earnings should be saved for future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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idea
to have a backup plan for everything in your life, that includes money
as well. We can't
predict our future and what may happen to us tomorrow. And in our hard times saved money
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money
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be s
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urrent job, and you are a person who usually spends all Add an article
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hopitalised
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hospitalised
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pay hospital bills and provide medicine, as really an unfortunate outcome she dies. In this
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money
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sudden
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a like situation.
One Correct your spelling
emergency
need
to learn assigning proper priorities on where to spend Change the verb form
needs
money
first
, your child's education in future is more important than a
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resent moment. And there various ways to save Add an article
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money
, and these money saving
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money-saving
money
is by putting it in a fixed deposite
account in the bank. Compound interest will keep adding profits to it while your Correct your spelling
deposit
money
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ixed Add an article
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deposite
bank account. If you are Correct your spelling
deposit
deposits
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losing
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losing
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a miser person in every situation is not a good Correct your spelling
being
idea
. Sometimes your
should reward yourself and seek ways of achieving happiness. In Change the pronoun
you
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,
money
. For example
often times people g
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to
anual
basis, to seek fun and enjoyment after doing the Correct your spelling
annual
hardwork
for Correct your spelling
hard work
a
entire year. But again as I explained in previous examples it is not a good Change the article
an
idea
to spend everything just behind a single vacation trip.
To conclude with, what my overall view is to save money
for the harder times and spend for enjoyment when you feel burn out from daily routine, but in m
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