Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter with regards to your recent advertisement about a part-time job
in a golf club
, which is related to responsibilities such
as golf club
& carts maintenance.
Currently, I am studying for my commerce graduation and have ample of
time for pursuing other activities, I have recently shifted to Change preposition
apply
this
city because in my hometown there were no good colleges and job
opportunities. And to support my college fees and daily expenses I am looking for job
.
Back in my town, I was employed at Add an article
a job
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Sports Club
which has a huge playground for Cricket, Football & Tennis . My job
was of
ground maintenance , where I used to manage run water sprinklers on a timely basis. Keeping ground covered in case of rains & Change preposition
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also
make sure the field is dry enough for playing conditions. Everyone at club
used to be amazed Correct article usage
the club
of
skills because using internet technology I used to keep a check on weathers & Change preposition
by
also
I am sports fan from my childhood so I used to arrange ground fields accordingly
which made visitors happier.
I have joined Mithibai college a month back which is just 10 minutes walk from your club
and well aware of my study schedules
so that it doesn’t affect any part of Fix the agreement mistake
schedule
job
schedule. I can start as soon as you want.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Girish WatwaniCorrect pronoun usage
my job
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite