Instructions
Read the question below and write a letter.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words. You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club.
Write a letter to the manager of the golf club.
In your letter, introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you could start

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regards to your recent advertisement about a part-time

job

in a golf

club

, which is related to responsibilities

such

as golf

club

& carts maintenance. Currently, I am studying for my commerce graduation and have ample

of

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time for pursuing other activities, I have recently shifted to

this

city because in my hometown there were no good colleges and

job

opportunities. And to support my college fees and daily expenses I am looking for

job

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. Back in my town, I was employed at

First

Sports

Club

which has a huge playground for Cricket, Football & Tennis . My

job

was

of

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ground maintenance , where I used to manage run water sprinklers on a timely basis. Keeping ground covered in case of rains &

also

make sure the field is dry enough for playing conditions. Everyone at

club

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used to be amazed

of

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skills because using internet technology I used to keep a check on weathers &

also

I am sports fan from my childhood so I used to arrange ground fields

accordingly

which made visitors happier. I have joined Mithibai college a month back which is just 10 minutes walk from your

club

and well aware of my study

schedules

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so that it doesn’t affect any part of

job

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my job

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schedule. I can start as soon as you want. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Girish Watwani