Instructions
Read the question below and write a letter.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words. You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club.
Write a letter to the manager of the golf club.
In your letter, introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you could start

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter with regards to your recent advertisement about a part-time
job
in a golf
club
, which is related to responsibilities
such
as golf
club
& carts maintenance. Currently, I am studying for my commerce graduation and have ample
of
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time for pursuing other activities, I have recently shifted to
this
city because in my hometown there were no good colleges and
job
opportunities. And to support my college fees and daily expenses I am looking for
job
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. Back in my town, I was employed at
First
Sports
Club
which has a huge playground for Cricket, Football & Tennis . My
job
was
of
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ground maintenance , where I used to manage run water sprinklers on a timely basis. Keeping ground covered in case of rains &
also
make sure the field is dry enough for playing conditions. Everyone at
club
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used to be amazed
of
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skills because using internet technology I used to keep a check on weathers &
also
I am sports fan from my childhood so I used to arrange ground fields
accordingly
which made visitors happier. I have joined Mithibai college a month back which is just 10 minutes walk from your
club
and well aware of my study
schedules
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so that it doesn’t affect any part of
job
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schedule. I can start as soon as you want. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Girish Watwani
Submitted by girish.watwani2008 on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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