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Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter – explain why you changed jobs – describe your new job – tell him/her your other news

#friend #jobs #job #news
Dear John, I am writing to let you know that I
finally
 got a Software Engineer position at Google. I am so happy to share
this
 news with you. As I told you earlier, my previous job was so bored
with
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 me. I kept working on fixing uncountable bugs
of
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 an existing system.
Thus
 I started seeking new job opportunities 2 months ago. Since I walked
in
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 Google’s office during my
first
 interview, I immediately knew that
this
 was my ideal workplace. My major responsibility is tuning search results on several The Google’s products. The most exciting thing is that my supervisor is a pioneer in
this
 area around the world. I believe that I can get enormous cutting-edge knowledge from him.
Furthermore
, I have bought a new house near my office. I sincerely invite you to come to visit
next
 month if you are free at that point in time. With best wishes, Michael
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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