Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

it is argued that some people believe that purpose of learning a foreign
language
is travel or work in oversea. While I have to admit
this
perspective is accurate to a somewhat extent, I still hold a notion that there are myriad benefits of studying international languages In a matter of fact, the amount of people learning other languages is more and more increase
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, they can only use them when they go abroad to visit or carry out their occupation.
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, it is unnecessary for the majority of people who not intend to travel or work in other countries to study foreign languages because without using
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can make their study pointless. another reason why common international
language
can only support for work or travel, if they
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less working in
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nvironment where using
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oreign
language
, it could be difficult for them to use their
second
language
in another place. In the other hand,
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who are in favour of studying foreign languages can bring promising benefits for
leaners
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.
this
is to say there
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bvious effect of that
such
as reducing the chances of dementia, keeping our brains healthy for longer, experiencing other cultures or accessing international information.
Besides
, if people
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good at international languages, they could open the door to better employment opportunities. The globalization
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brought many investments for countries as well as
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for local people,
thus
, inhabitants need
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oster capacity of
language
to cooperate with foreign partners. To recapitulate,
this
is to say foreign languages take pride of place, it brings manifold for people
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therefore
, people should appreciate the crucial of them and have a huge investment in term of time and money in order to achieve best results.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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