Some people think that factory faming is essential while others against to this initiatives. write both views and give your opinion?

It is true that demand for animal products

have

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been increased significantly around the globe.

Athough

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advocates of

industrail

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industrial

production of animal

husbantry

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husbandry

point out that

this

can bring many advantages to

human

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population, others hold the view

of

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that

this

harms wildlife and the environment. In my opinion, even though there are some negatives

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be seen

due to

this

farming method, I

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believe

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positives outweigh its demerits.

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the one hand, those who consider intensive farming

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beneficial assert that

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is to meet

growing

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need

of

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animal food products. In other words, as human

popoluation

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population

is growing in a uncontrolled manner, the availability of land to cultivate food and food

producats

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products

are minimum,

therefore

,

this

new innovative method of farming can resolve the issue

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a certain

extend

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.

For instance

, by doing

this

, a large scale of animals, poultry and

cattles

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cattle

castles

, can be reared with minimum

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. Eventually, housing,

nutrion

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nutrition

and health are protected by

this

.

However

, on the other side, opponents of

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arguement

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argument

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intensive farming is dangerous to man and

the

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nature. In

a

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recent studies, it has been noticed that farms on which animals are intensively produced are extensively using many

antibiotic

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to prevent any diseases, which harmfully

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the health of the workers as they have developed antibiotic resistance.

Similarly

, some animal diseases spread to workers as well.

Apart from

this

, the balance of nature can be tarnished since these animals may be genetically manipulated,

for example

, to produce more eggs or milk and to grow bigger. The animal activists

are oppose

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this

trend and consider

this

as an abuse. In conclusion,

while

some consider factory rearing

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as

an ideal solution

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industrial

producation

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production

meat

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and related foods, some have an oppositive view

on

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this

. I firmly support the former opinion since

this

can eliminate the hunger of meat eaters.