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Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that we space programmes should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is debated by people whether we should keep investing in space exploration for its speculated benefits or should we stop pouring down money in
this
 lane. I stand for the picture to not be so black or white. Exploration and advancement are the part of human evolution and it must continue but within bounds of control. The possibilities that can lead to exploring space can be endless. The universes are filled with unimaginable wonders
such
 as alien life or a new form of material that can reinvent the entire world and its functioning. Another reason for the exploration of the universe is to find an alternative home for humankind as the earth is being overpopulated and being wiped off its resources everyday. The grievance of
this
 matter has
also
 been discussed by some famous scientists
such
 as Steven Hawking. At the other hand, we have people protesting at the cost required for
such
 programs and it is
also
 very understandable. As there is always an opportunity cost involved and there is
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rave matter requiring financial attention
such
 as poverty, hunger, environment preservation, etc. To Conclude, I would say that in the pursuit of the sky, we shouldn’t forget our roots. In the dreams and trouble of tomorrow, we shouldn’t neglect today and its urgencies.
Therefore
 the bodies responsible for the expenditure of space should take calculative measures that reap the benefits of humankind for tomorrow as well as do justice to the emergencies of today.
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