Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays there is a massive upsurge in the modern renovation of old cities.all the there are advantages to

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modernization

process. There are innumerable benefits of rebuilding old cities as per the modern time.

To begin

with, it has a good impact on the economy as

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will bring. job opportunities to the residents of that city.

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these cities become a tourist attraction which in turn helps to build up the economy for a long period.

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, India had inculcated

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tourism has gained a lot of popularity. Clearly, these benefits

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provided job opportunities to many which

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helped them to enhance their quality of life.

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, there are some drawbacks associated

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modernization

of old cities.

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,tourism has led to

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in the crime rates in many cities.

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,according to a survey in India crime rates have increased drastically.

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, for the purpose of

modernization

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the originality of the old monuments will be

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lot. Overall, these aforementioned demerits are insignificant and

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can be ignored. In conclusion, even though

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rebuilding

old cities

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some pitfalls, it is eclipsed by the advantages. For the growth of the economy. The process of

modernization

of old cities is a positive move by many governments and will bring prosperity

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its cities.