Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic

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congestion has become

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roblem in almost all countries. Some people argue that effectual way to solve the issue is to migrate people from countryside to

city

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centre.

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, I do not

complelety

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completely

accord with the

agrument

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argument

.

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will lead

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more problems as metropolitan cities are already populated.

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with, Most of

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rban areas are already struggling with their overcrowded

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population

.

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Urbanization will

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compound the problem. It would only be possible if

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c

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ity

accomodate

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accommodate

them.

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ost of living in the towns are quite high than outskirts. Metropolis

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already prone to area density.

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, Delhi is

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ost

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traffic congested

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and

poluted

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polluted

city

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in the world. Local and countryside side people commute daily by their personal cars.

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it

rises

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the

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jams and contaminating air. As a study shows

delhi

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roads is increasing seven

percent

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annually is about 537 cars are added every day on these roads. Unfortunately, Most

of

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ities are starved for space

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shifting people to

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ity centre will not solve the current scenario.

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Government should take necessary action to prevent the problem by providing public transportation, by constructing better roads or moving

industies

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industries

to outer corner cities. Certainly,

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will reduce

traffic

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congestion and air pollution. By providing job facilities in

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uburbs will definitely be

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sharp decline in the number of people

traveling

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travelling

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to cities. For exemplify, Mostly multinational companies are setting up their offices in surrounding areas.

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cost effective

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and it gives employment. Obviously

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inclination towards

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ountryside would minimise the

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. In conclusion, It is not

pratically

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practically

feasible to encourage all rural area people to move to big cities as there is already a scarcity of space. A better solution is to create more employment opportunities in small to towns.