Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic
congestion has become
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roblem in almost all countries. Some people argue that effectual way to solve the issue is to migrate people from countryside to
city
centre.
However
, I do not
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completely
accord with the
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argument
.
This
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more problems as metropolitan cities are already populated.
To begin
with, Most of
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rban areas are already struggling with their overcrowded
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population
.
Therefore
Urbanization will
also
compound the problem. It would only be possible if
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ity
accomodate
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accommodate
them.
Secondly
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ost of living in the towns are quite high than outskirts. Metropolis
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already prone to area density.
For Instance
, Delhi is
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ost
traffic congested
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and
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polluted
city
in the world. Local and countryside side people commute daily by their personal cars.
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it
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the
traffic
jams and contaminating air. As a study shows
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roads is increasing seven
percent
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annually is about 537 cars are added every day on these roads. Unfortunately, Most
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ities are starved for space
hence
shifting people to
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ity centre will not solve the current scenario.
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Government should take necessary action to prevent the problem by providing public transportation, by constructing better roads or moving
industies
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industries
to outer corner cities. Certainly,
This
will reduce
traffic
congestion and air pollution. By providing job facilities in
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uburbs will definitely be
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sharp decline in the number of people
traveling
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to cities. For exemplify, Mostly multinational companies are setting up their offices in surrounding areas.
Firstly
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and it gives employment. Obviously
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this
inclination towards
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ountryside would minimise the
traffic
. In conclusion, It is not
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practically
feasible to encourage all rural area people to move to big cities as there is already a scarcity of space. A better solution is to create more employment opportunities in small to towns.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public transportation
  • traffic congestion
  • private vehicles
  • urban areas
  • long commutes
  • population density
  • sustainable transportation
  • efficient transportation options
  • cycling lanes
  • pedestrian pathways
  • advanced transit systems
  • overcrowding
  • transportation infrastructure
  • urban development
  • pollution
  • quality of life
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