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Some people think that spending a lot on holding weeding parties, birthday parties and other celebration is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is undeniably true that these days celebrating birthday, anniversaries or holding marriages on a large scale is the trend.
Although
 some argue that celebrating
such
 events is crucial for the sake of community and individual, I,
however
, agree with those who hold the opinion that
such
 amount is unnecessary expenses and can be utilized in the better way. On the one hand, it is believed that celebrating
such
 events are indispensable for the society members as they think
such
 as marriage occurs once in a lifetime and they want to treasure those memories for the rest of their life by celebrating with friends and relatives.
For example
, Mr Mukesh Ambani, who is the richest person of India, spent more than $100 million on his son’s marriage in 2018 and invited many celebrities from politics and Bollywood industry.
However
, in the whole world
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many people are suffering from hunger and thirst.
This
 gives me a valid reason not to agree with
this
 view as
such
 amount would be utilized properly for other reasons.
On the other hand
, it is said that holding wedding parties or birthday celebration is not worth because they believe
such
 expenses should be made on people who are in desperate need for food, education and proper medical facilities. To elaborate, Africa is the undeveloped country and there are more than 30%
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people who do have food for a single time.
Hence
, if
such
 money is spent on those who are in need rather than investing
on
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 celebration and parties, many lives will be saved.
Therefore
 I firmly believe that spending
l
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arge amount of funds to celebrate
such
 events is a waste of money. In conclusion,
although
 celebrating
such
o
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ccasion allow us to remember those movements until the
last
 breath, spending money to satiate the hunger of poor people can save thousands of lives.
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