In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging out quality of life. do you agree or disagree?

Globalisation has allowed big organisations to market their products in the global market in the

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20 years.

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has led to increased consumerism where people are spending more than they can afford to. I agree with the

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above as the number of people that are in debt has risen due to the increased spending items that are not essential and the effects it has on the environment.

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, the marketing platforms that most of

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ompanies utilise reaches out to masses and is now no longer limited to newspapers and magazines.

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majority of people who own social accounts that have access to these

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advertisements

and multinational companies utilise those platforms to market their goods.

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attracts buyers and while people may not

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need that

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new gadget, they are lured into spending.

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,

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leads to splurges that the consumer cannot afford.

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, landing the individuals in unwanted debts.

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, the waste and pollution that arises from the various packagings

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to global warming. There are several materials used in the production of goods which eventually end up in landfills and are often not recycled.

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, these materials are often

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and take a longer time to breakdown. If no measures are taken, we would see a substantial increase

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waste over the

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irresponsible consumerism. To conclude, the various channels that allow us to buy into the idea that we need to make an expensive purchase from big companies is a notion that needs to be eradicated. We would have fewer people in debt and

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the reduced wastages from mindless

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consumerism

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would be stopped.