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Do you feel it is better for young people leaving school who study further at university or go straight into the workplace? Give your reasons for answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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It is the most debatable question, whether young people should opt their
further
 education at a university or they should go straight into a workplace. Some people believe that it is more beneficial for the youths to go to the workplaces after their schooling, whereas others argue that students must opt their
further
 studies at the universities. I totally agree with the latter view. It has more pros outweigh cons.
First
 and foremost, university education is the
last
 stage before starting a professional career.
Also
, universities are specialized to give depth
knowledge
 on different fields, because of these they hire some experts of a particular field to give a wide
knowledge
 to their students in a particular manner.
Moreover
, they make their students more capable, not only by giving
knowledge
,
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 but
also
 by giving practical skills with the help of practical and experiments. Owing to these, these students ought to turn invaluable employees in any industry or company.
For example
, engineers can able to deal with any major machine failure in the industry by their theoretical
knowledge
 and practical skills, which were trained by the universities.
Furthermore
, they provide opportunities for students to participate in extracurricular activities, when they were studying, due to
this
 they can learn some most important qualities like competition and co-operation.
On the other hand
, those who go straight into the workplace would understand the value of money and know the importance of hard work in life.
Also
, they gain more job experience than those who study at university. They are capable of tackling any finance-related problems at own. Their mental toughness is more and they have more real-time problem-solving skills than any other else. They become self-reliant. To conclude, the universities, not only provide an academic education
,
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 but
also
 they prepare their students for field jobs as well.
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