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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The four pie charts reveal the
production
 of
electricity
 by different fuel sources in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the usage of coal in
production
 was the highest in Australia in 2000, whereas France utilized more nuclear power for
production
 in 2000. It is important to note that, in 1980, the
electricity
 produced by coal was halved in Australia, whereas it reached at the peak in 2000 and it produced its most units of
electricity
. Hydropower and natural gas were produced almost the same
electricity
 units in 1980, but in the case of oil, it decreased dramatically in 2000 and reached at 2. Australia never used nuclear power for
production
.
On the other hand
, more than half units of
electricity
 only produced by nuclear power in France in 2000 than in1980.
Also
, a quarter unit of
electricity
 produced by natural gas in France in 1980, but it fell drastically in 2000. Oil consumption increased marginally in France in 2000 than in1980. Coal utilization remained the same in both years in France. It was 25 units. Hydropower unit's consumption fell from5 in 1980 to 2 in 2000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Harmony
  • Melody
  • Rhythm
  • Socio-cultural
  • Artistic expression
  • Cognitive development
  • Soundtrack
  • Moral implications
  • Acoustic ecology
  • Intellectual property
  • Authenticity
  • Commercialization
  • Media literacy
  • Sensory overload
  • Acculturation
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