Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is import for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Childeren

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Children

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odern world

are habituate

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are habituated

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about

o

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their

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wn choices on

rouitine

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routine

life.

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is became

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h

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ot topic that, Does children hast to make

decion

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decision

decisions

by themself or not. Two

group

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groups

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are

devided

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divided

into

this

topic and there are,

this

is pushing children to

became

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selfish or it is part of

improve

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improving

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the

decision

about

thier

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their

her

life.

Firstly

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a

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full freedom to the children about control

thier

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their

life

,

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apply

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will be increase chance to

beacome

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become

arrogrent

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arrogant

, by self , and

stubron

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stubborn

.

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, children

are has

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fully

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full

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access to food and clothes

then

, there are do not care about

thier

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their

health. They like to eat, what they like.

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is go

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into

b

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ad habit, they

are eat

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are eaten

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by

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my

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own. Do not care about what other people eat and share to food with

other

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others

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and do not know about, will increase love or bonding to

other

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others

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.The cloth has

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ariety of

choice

and money difference. Children are become show off person, will by mistake hurt

some one

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someone

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feeling and they not

reliase

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release

realise

about it.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, entertainment

are

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is

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truly enjoyed, when

play

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playing

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together with respect and aware

about

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of

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surronding

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surrounding

.

Sometime

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Sometimes

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,

compormise

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compromise

with your feeling and

choice

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enjoyed

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it.

Finnally

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Finally

, some

decision

are will be correct, when it

is choose

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is chosen

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by

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erson. Which affect its most.

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, Education has lots of different

choice

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choices

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and hard to know

perticular

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particular

, which field children like and good in it. If children are

froced

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forced

to choose other field and its totally out of interest. They are tried just to

fulfill

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fulfil

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wish about parent wish. They

are become

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become

have become

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mediocare

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mediocre

medicare

, never pushed themselves to be sucessed on it. In

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nutshell

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n

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ut shell, there would be

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thin line about children take

thier

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their

decision

by on or obay people decisions. According to me, children are given

choice

to make

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ecision. but, not a full access, when

its

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it's

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not

favor

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on their side, just stop there.