The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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The notion of having just one vocation has become a theory of the past. The new world consists of people with numerous occupations who are consistently learning and moving with the rapidly innovating world.

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, there has been growing media coverage which has had

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reat influence on people's attitude towards multiple careers. It is common to have a

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source of income in the 21st century. The main reason behind the additional job is either to earn extra cash or to fulfil a passion one has, either way

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people are enjoying and investing in many fields and realising that they can manage to have two different careers.

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, a study published by Business Review in 2020 reported that 89% influencers on social media have another job which they manage daily. A prime example, MMA fighter Josh Skully, has become quite well-known for his channel on YouTube, many people did not know he was an athlete too.

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, it is undeniable that some individuals would still like to focus on one career pathway,

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, others despite being in difficult fields continue to update themselves by learning.

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, a study published by the New Scientist magazine reported that 76%

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teaching, researching and running businesses, even after retirement.

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reported 45%

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a new career path. Based on these statistics, it can be inferred that there is no age to stop educating yourself. To conclude from the aforementioned argument, I firmly believe, there is no age or limitation to having another career. One can start

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alternative or additional job any point in their lives, as it is only going to result in gaining knowledge which is above anything else.

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Your opinion

Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more in education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

everyone should be encouraged to use fewer resources rather than recycle more. To what extent do you agree?

Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?

Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?