A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear John, My name is Jazzy and I am writing to apply for a job in your restaurant as a waitress. I saw an advertisement in the Daily Times newspaper

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morning and came to know

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are currently looking for full-time workers. Currently, I am working in Tim Horton's on

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but I need a full-time job. I think I will be suitable for

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job because I have all

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skills. I have studied business and supply chain management and I have

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experience

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three years as a customer service representative. I used to work in one of the Chinese

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for one year. If you will consider me for

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position, I can come anytime

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the weekdays for an interview.

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, if you need any referrals , I will ask my manager and will get

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for you. You can contact me by email : [email protected]

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faithfully, Jazzy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

156 words

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