There is no doubt that the latest technological advancement improves our quality of life.
, there are some people who think that
cutting-edge technology widens the gulf between the rich and the poor, in my opinion, I firmly object
argument because after the development, even, the economically stricken people
get equal opportunities.
On the one hand, those who think the internet has revolutionised the way we live.
In other words
, now, it is possible for anyone can contact their friends and family who live another part of the world through online services.
, booking and travelling of air ticket were only affordable, irrespective of their social class.
, in the past, it was expensive to possess a land phone at the home, but currently, almost everyone has personal phones.
piece of equipment can use to control the day to day affairs more effectively as any rich man does.
On the other hand
, opponents of the above- mentioned argument point out that many new gadgets are so expensive that can be purchased by the elite members of society. The reason is that these are meant only to make
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of rich even comfortable and elegant.
, many modern kitchen appliances are bought by them
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and used on a regular basis. Apart from
, learning how to incorporate these devices in houses are taught in private schools that never can be seen in public schools, since it is not for the poor.
In conclusion, people have a different concept
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technology has beneficial impacts on humans or
increased the gap between various social class. I strongly think that
enhanced the quality of life in all sectors of people. and minimised the differences.