You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Hello Monica, As you are aware, I planned to move into the apartment at 13, Grant Road on 1st October 2020. Sadly, I am afraid I won't be able to proceed with our plan, owing to my current medical condition.

Last

week at work, we had a team outing encompassing varied sporting events. During the basketball game, there was some water

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at one edge of the court which caused me to slip and fell. I was rushed to the hospital and after examining my hand's X-ray, the doctor concluded that its a fracture

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would take nearly 6-8 weeks to heal,

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violating our original agreed upon date. Currently, I am sitting at my home in Kuala Lumpur with a plastered hand. I hope you understand my

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.ma and I would love to move into the same house, but a month later, which would be 1st November 2020. Looking forward to a positive response from you. Thanks and Regards, Chandler Bing.

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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

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