Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

It is often suggested that performing an interesting activity with a kid will develop more creative skills
instead
of spending time on reading books. I strongly agree with
this
point of view, as I believe that an act can engage children into
role playing
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which develop social skills, while
also
helping them
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creative. Children enjoy playing
fun
activities rather than reading books. We should use
this
as our advantage and create an interesting activity for them.
As a result
, they learn about the story and
also
the important characteristics that the character possess.
Such
activities help kids develop social skills, which cannot be learned through book reading.
For instance
, creating an interesting play of Robin Hood
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will help kids learn the story and understand the character much better than simply reading a book. Reading books possess great knowledge, but fail to achieve skills like being creative or thinking. Creating
a
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enjoyable
fun
study activity will grab kids attention, which interests them in learning and exploring the subject.
For example
, creating a
fun
game on maths using props, will interest the kid in learning
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. Knowledge can be gained by reading books;
however
, activities help in learning more skills which are impossible to gain just by reading books. In my opinion, kids are attracted by
fun
activities and always show interest to learn more.
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