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Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Some people are of the opinion that the vendors should sell local consumables products
instead
 of marketing imported products. Even though it gives an advantage and economical benefits to the indigenous producers, imported edibles cannot be completely taken out of stores due to its increasing popularity.
Hence
, I partially agree with
this
 notion. On the one side, several benefits to the local food suppliers when their product is bought and sold in the local
market
.
Firstly
, the demand
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 the goods in the
market
 surge at a tremendous rate when imported goods are reduced or completely excluded.
For instance
, in UAE 50% of the fruits and vegetables are imported from Asian markets.
As a result
, choosing country grown products will improve the local
market
 demand and supply. Additional, there is an income circulation within the country.
As a result
, it is very suitable to consider selling local food products over the imported ones. On the other side, there is a downside to
this
 option of choosing ingrown food products.
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there is a huge demand for international consumables. People are ready to spend money to get there decide items.
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if
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 stores choose not to keep imported consumables, the customers will go online to buy it is a very reliable and convenient option
instead
 of using the local substitute. For the more, there are certain products which can only be produced under
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ertain atmospheric condition and with the killer products.
For example
, Parmesan cheese cannot be made in every country because of the requirement of certain bacteria for optimum taste.
Hence
,it is not always viable to ignore
their
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 International products. To conclude,
although
 stores should try every possible
ways
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 to support
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 own local products to get into
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arket, it is not always feasible to ignore the growing needs of consumers towards the foreign consumables.
Instead
, the government should take initiatives to aid the local producers than shutting of the imports.
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