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Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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New technologies revolutionize many things in
this
 contemporary world which has positive and negative effects on everyone’s life.
Although
technology
 is
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ood source of communication which helps to bring people close to each other, it affects the culture of some nation as some people do not prefer to talk on
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elephone.
This
 essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of modern
technology
. TO commence with, modernization in
technology
 provides comfort in life and it makes
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life easier than before. One phone call can solve the big problem within minutes, there is no need to wait and visit
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any place.
For instance
, I am going somewhere and if my parents are not at home, I will call to let them know where I am going rather than waiting.
As a result
, it saves lots of
time
 and connects the whole world together.
Furthermore
, there is no difference if anyone is living overseas because
technology
 connects us together with
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hone. People can do email, phone call and messages anytime to anyone without any
time
 problem. It will deliver the messages at the same to another person which is helpful in an emergency case.
On the other hand
, people are doing more face
time
to
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 each other
instead
 of
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ersonal meeting. It is demolishing cultural activity to visit
other
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 person’s house for meeting or
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up of tea. They are getting information online through chat about each other
that is
 why they do not travel and not try to find special
time
 for
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eeting. In conclusion, while there are advantages of modern
technology
, it has some perilous ramifications on culture. It should
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 in limit and people should meet not daily but try to meet one
time
 in a month.
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