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Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems . What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

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Motorways are significantly helpful for people, who have to reach in
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hort time on the job or any other places because speed limits always high and
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erson do not face any traffic lights. As we know there are
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lethora of advantages of freeways, but on the other side
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high rates of accidents and
noise
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iggest
disdavantages
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disadvantages
. Driving carefully
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 high speed and building the highways far from residential areas are
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ost suitable solutions
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this
 problem.
To begin
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otorway is
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high speed
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 limit, which sometimes
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 fatal accidents.
Although
, it makes highways super fast and quickest way to travel,
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it
also
 causes many
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 for ridders those are driving very fast with no care of accident though.
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econd main complication is
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noise
 pollution, which produced by
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igh speed of vehicles so it is very hard for those people who are living close by the motorway.
For example
, M1 is
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ongest highway in Australia accident rates are very high, which
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buy the house near to highway.
On the other hand
, there are solutions to fix these problems, if people drive with care all the time
then
 speed limits will no longer be a cause of accidents and people should avoid line changes in high traffic times on high speed.
Furthermore
, the government should build the hight far from the
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residential
 areas if
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 not possible
then
 they should build high walls
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around
 the sides so
noise
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access
 can be controlled. In conclusion,
therefore
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high speed
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 limits and
noise
 from vehicles are the major problems of motorways but
neverhteless
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nevertheless
, it can be solved by the care of riders and with the little attention of the ministry.
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