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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Nowadays, people have
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 to watch a movie not only by going to a cinema but
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 to movie make us numb and people feel want to watch more stimulation products that indicate us to TV
crime
 dramas or
crime
 fiction movies. In somehow we all feel relatable to the characters yet unrealistic stories are grab our attention. In
this
 modern society, we are able to
access
 to news from all over the world and almost nothing to impress us anymore. People are constantly looking for
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razy drama to forget your own problems and realities. To conclude, In many countries, people have
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 to movies and get attracted by breathtaking stories of
crime
 fiction and Tv
crime
 dramas to forget our own issues in real life. Those things are our way of escape from real life in
this
 busy stressful modern society.
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