Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.to what extend do you agree or dis agree.
Nature
is a humongous gift from God which received
to the wellbeing of human beings.Some people think that they should Verb problem
that is related
be taken
measures to maintain the environment for the future Wrong verb form
take
while
others do
not Verb problem
are
concern
Replace the word
concerned
it
.I totally agree with Change preposition
about it
this
notion and this
essay will discuss both positive and negative impacts.
On the one hand, do not take necessary actions from today we have to face natural disasters in the near future. We should concern about air, water and soil pollutions
. If not we have to face inevitable problems, Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
such
as floods, soil and sea erosions. Moreover
, with the above conditions automatically
global warming rises. It results, for Rephrase
apply
examples
, Fix the agreement mistake
example
disappear
the glazier layer, Replace the word
the disappearance of
increase
seawater levels and Wrong verb form
increased
spread
Correct article usage
the spread
diseases
from unknown microorganisms. Change preposition
of diseases
Overall
, if people need to survive they should love the
Correct article usage
apply
nature
mother.
On the other hand, humans should take measures to deforestation and reduce environmental hazard
things. Because, forests are the sources which provide pure air to Fix the agreement mistake
hazards
breath
, clean water to drink and Replace the word
breathe
supplier
of all basic needs. Fix the agreement mistake
suppliers
Furthermore
, poisons
things, Replace the word
poisonous
to
illustrate, industrial garbage into water streams and excessive carbon dioxide from vehicles and industries must be discarded in proper ways. Fix the infinitive
apply
According to
the aforementioned reasons, otherwise
our surroundings Rephrase
apply
unable
to Add a missing verb
are unable
protect
.
In conclusion, most Wrong verb form
be protected
of
Change preposition
apply
the
people Correct article usage
apply
in
the globe have Change preposition
around
a
faith that they should look after Remove the article
apply
nature
to reduce the effects of natural disasters and global warming by re-plantation and environmentally friendly measures. Because there is an equal balance between the
man and Correct article usage
apply
nature
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