To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that GM foods are not only unhealthy but affect the nature too.Do you agree or disagree about this

It is beyond the doubt that many foods which we buy today are scientifically modified. It is often thought
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to satisfy the hunger, others consider the trend would harm
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nvironment. I personally disagree
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the view as it has reduced the problem of food scarcity and increased the production of farming.
Firstly
, when crops are genetically modified , the texture and flavour of the product would enhance to a great extend.
As a result
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tastier compared to the original version and can cultivate in a large quantity since it has a capacity to resist many pests.
For example
, in India , Jaya, a variety of rice, Which is capable to fight against most of the fungal diseases, same time, no compromise in productivity.
Thus
, eventually, food scarcity of the country is hugely minimised.
Secondly
, If crops and vegetables are
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cultivated
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can be exported,
consequently
, the exporter can earn financial stability and improve their GDP.
However
, the quality, size and shelf live are should be excellent as
this
has to be reached another part of the world. The opponents often say about the negatives of
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scientific modification,
such
as attack on Non-modified crops or resistance to another animals' attack, but there is no solid
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for their argument.
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, many
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advises farmers to use these seeds in their
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to increase the cultivation and make
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rofit. In conclusion, people have a different opinion regarding whether modified edibles are good or bad. In my view, even though there are some minor issues, the benefits which brought to mankind are huge. It is recommended that there should be more research conducted in
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better future.
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