Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is indubitable that many people prefer to follow non-vegetarian food items.
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,it is sometimes thought being vegan is better in terms of health issues. In my opinion, I believe that including animal products would bring more benefits to the human body.
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, if a person consumes only plant-origin products would lack some essential nutrients from their
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, they may experience deficiency disorders,
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, they prone many associated diseases.
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, when somebody purposefully
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flesh edibles, would result in
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protein
deficiency and body mass reduces, eventually, high risk for communicable diseases.
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, it is important to have these foods on a regular basis.
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, It has proven that we, humans, historically omnivorous never be herbivorous.
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, those who live in extreme climates
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as cold and hot, they could only find animals for consumption as there would not be any vegetation grow, for them
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vegan
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never practical.
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, medical practitioners of that area advise inhabitants to have more
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protein
, which is abundant in
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defleshed
, to fight against the weather. By seeing
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, it is illogical to think to become vegetarian. Since there is no scientific evidence to prove the vegetables is only enough to have a balanced
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for a human. In conclusion, people have a different view on whether to eat meat or only
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diet
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. I firmly consider that if eating flesh, it would bring many benefits to mankind. It is recommended that there should be more research on
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field for a better future.
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