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Many adults think that childhood and schooldays are the best years of a person's life.What the reason's for this? Do you agree or disagree ?

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There are some
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 who reflect on childhood memories and deem that it is one of the best aspects of life. As there are fewer
responsiblities
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responsibilities
 and financial freedom, I believe that it is true if the household has good financial standing.
Firstly
, children in homes that are financially stable have few obligations towards managing their life. They spend
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ulk of their time on
school
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schoolwork
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work
,
sociallising
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socialising
socializing
 with their peers and having fun.
This
 is possible when their parents are supporting them financially and meeting their basic needs.
Futhemore
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Furthermore
, children and youths do not have to
work
 to support themselves
comapred
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compared
 to adults who have to balance
work
 and family. The mental freedom allows young ones to enjoy their growing up years.
On the other hand
,
childen
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children
 from
lower income
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 families may not be as fortunate as compared to families who are of a higher income. They have to struggle to make ends meet very often pushing
adolesents
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adolescents
 to
work
 at an early age.
For instance
, in developing nations poverty rates
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 children and teenagers to
work
instead
 of going to school. The various tribulations that children in families that do not have
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good financial standing are often deprived of
expiriencing
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experiencing
 the supposed best parts of their lives. To conclude, I agree that while childhood could be the most fun and enjoyable part of life,
however
,
this
 could only be true depending on the income group and nation that child comes from. It is vital to ensure that every child has the right to good memories to reflect on when they grow up and money should not be the major factor determining their happiness.
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