In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The industrialization has changed the entire world.It has been observed in some countries that the regime is motivating the entrepreneurs to open small scale industries in villages.

This

trend has numerous merits as well as demerits that will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.

To begin

with positives,It will provide employment opportunities for the people who live in a rural area because in these regions they are employed mostly in cattle rearing,farming which only fulfils their basic amenities of life.

For instance

, a survey was conducted in all the countryside areas of India,and its result was that a few years back,during the industrialization policy Government of India had given authority to private firms to establish industries in rural areas.

As a result

,it was concluded that seventy per cent of people get employment because of

this

On the other hand

This

trend has some loopholes.The major drawback is that if anyone wants to build a factory in a rural area,

then

he/she needs a lot of money because,in order to develop a firm in the village one needs capital

such

as land ,labour which is not easily available in these areas.To illustrate,One of my friends was from Canada,and she established a cycle industry ,but she had spent a lot of money making a building . To recapitulate, I would like to write that demerits outweigh demerits.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

220 words

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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with a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on production more GM foods. what are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this? GM: Genetically Modified

The computer is widely used in education and some people think that teachers will not play important roles in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?