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Schools should teach students about the importance of the environment by setting a good example. do you agree or disagree

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There is currently a contentious argument over the reason why schools should educate students that how important to protect the environment by setting a good example. In
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I am going to examine potential explanations for
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, how we can protect our environment ? In most of
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chool has a vending machine or cafeteria for students to buy snacks or drinks and those are mostly packaging in plastics. Educate students about how terribly impact of
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 wastes to mother earth by showing a picture of floating
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cean or a sea turtle eating
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 bugs. Those images are powerful.
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irst steps to reduce
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sage of
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ealization of reality.
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, it is important to save the sage of energy to reduce CO2 to stop global warming. Teachers can encourage students to turn off the lights if they are not using or before leaving the classroom. Small realizations are key to change our behaviour. To conclude, good education gave students important knowledge and realizations about their surroundings. Without
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 education, we can't protect our mother earth.
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