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You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear
Mr.
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Loyds, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I would not be able to continue the digital marketing
course
, which I joined on the 1st of April 2020.
Although
, I learned many new Digital skills through
such
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course
 and enjoyed it immensely. As I mentioned in the
Course
 form, I work full-time in an IT company. Until now, it was easy to manage the
course
 along with the office work.
However
, my company just signed a USA based project, and they chose a team of five people, including me, is being to send
the
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 USA to negotiate some terms and conditions. I will probably be out of the country for a couple of weeks.
Initially
, I thought to continue the
course
 online, but now it seems not possible to me as per schedule will be. Could you please permit me to continue the
course
 after returning to India?
Otherwise
, please reserve a seat for me in the
next
 cohort in September because
this
course
 is highly beneficial for my career. I look forward to receiving your response, yours sincerely, Elen
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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