Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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increased at that much extend that, there are many theories

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re in the world. One group says that

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some plants and animals are

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edge

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of extinct, which were helping balance

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ecology of the world. Some

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that there are many environmental

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are

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going in

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cosystem, would

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first

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Firstly

, it is recently discovered by scientist that honey bees are

imporatant

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important

to the plant to produced, best qualities food. There are short of bees in some countries and

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that

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of period, the food

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less produced.

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, the land and different condition are

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ame as before reduced bees in that area.

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Furthermore

, there are more dead animals and grass shoppers are increased

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articular

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eason behind is

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agle. which has a job to eat dead animals and grass shoppers. That would be naturally clean the

surronding

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surrounding

environment

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agle.

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problems are increased in

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area. On other hand, Many cities are over polluted, because of population and

industrilization

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industrialization

. One of them

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bejing, capital of

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epublic of china. In

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wintertime

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inter

time

, when most of

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ases are near to earth compare to the summer. The

airqualities

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air qualities

would be far less

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breathable air for human.

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, the problems for humans would be whole in ozen layar. Which is for us to protect from deadly UV rays comes from the sun. The projection is

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if humans would be failed to repair the ozen

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with in

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100 years. That could be a

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forced

human to live in

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nderground after 200 years, to survive without protective

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layer

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is suffering from the

environment

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cosystem for

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etter life. As per my opinion, Plants and animals are connected with

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nvironment as we are. It kind of what you do

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will bounce back. The best way to deal with we have to seat in a room and decide to cover up both plants and animals damage and same

time

we have to solve the solution, which has created by us.